Economics plays a good role in my story/life because I would not be where I am now without it. My mom works as a manager at DuPage medical group, my dad worked as a carpenter, he also worked at a church. My whole life I have always been a middle class family, We do sometimes struggle with money, but who doesn't. As an adult I plan to be a vet or vet tech. Some examples of how this impacted my life is every morning my mom leaves at 7 to go to work and me and my brother have to eat alone. Also if we want something we might not be able to get it because of the cost.
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Sam S.
12/1/2014 12:30:45 am
This is a great start! There is a grammar error or two but it's really good. Not only do you have economics, it has civics too. Keep up the good work! :)
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Emily W
12/1/2014 05:15:16 am
This is really good! You stayed on topic the whole time. You could have added more details but overall it's good :)
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Ruqqaiya F.
12/2/2014 12:10:45 am
I really liked how you stayed on your topic and added a few experiences instead of just writing about economics
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Patrick R.
12/9/2014 12:49:27 am
I really liked how you stuck to the topic. I also love how you gave your plans. Great Job!
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Melanie A
12/9/2014 12:52:16 am
I liked how you stayed on the topic and also added your own personal experiences. Good work!
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Alexa Fl
12/9/2014 03:36:19 am
Great job on staying on topic! Next time add the defenition! But it's pretty good!
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JaNee M
12/17/2014 10:40:29 pm
GREAT start! Try to give more detail in how your mothers job impacted you. Keep up the great work.
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Miranda N
12/18/2014 01:18:24 am
my mom used to work for Dupage Medical Group too!
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Maddy M
12/18/2014 01:18:54 am
I enjoyed how you explained that economics doesn't only affect you and your brother but also your parents. It was a really good idea to show how it might affect your future! Great Job!!
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meghan
1/6/2015 01:08:43 am
I like how you stayed on topic. Keep up the good work
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Jackie
1/9/2015 03:26:26 am
I like how well you described about the impact in your life :)
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